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A DP Mary-Sue Fic

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"He's Mine"

Danny Phantom was happily flying through the sky until he landed in front of his house and changed into human form. He stretched his arms out and gave a relaxed sigh.
"Finally." He said with a smile. "I have the rest of the day to finally relax."
"Danny…" a small eerie voice whispered through the air.
Danny looked around suspiciously, but didn't see anything. "I must be hearing things." He blankly assumed.
But then the voice whispered out again, "Danny…"
Danny turned to where the voice came from and gasped to see a strange figure land in front of him. It was a pretty teenage girl with long flowing white hair, golden yellow eyes, wearing a short slimming white and gold dress with a frilly skirt, and an AP symbol in the middle in the same style of Danny's emblem, long high-heel boots, and long white gloves. She also had a pair of elegant angel wings on her back.
"Uh…" Danny said, nearly speechless. "Am I being visited by my guardian angel or something?"
"Oh, Danny," the girl spoke in a beautiful elegant voice. "I finally made it back."
"You did?" Danny asked, still feeling confused, "Who are you anyway?"
The girl giggled and responded, "Don't you remember? We knew each other since childhood."
"Uhh…we did?"
Then her face saddened. "It was a month ago that my father took me away and did those weird experiments on me."
Danny wasn't really sure what to say next, except, "Uh, gee, I'm…really sorry about that, Miss. But…who is your father anyway?"
The girl had a troubled look as she answered, "Vlad Masters, of course."
"Vlad Masters?!" Danny repeated in shock. "There's no way that's true! Who are you anyway?"
"Why don't you remember me, Danny?" the girl asked with a smile. "I'm Amelia Masters. But I'm also known as 'Angel Phantom'."
"'Angel Phantom'?" Danny questioned. "But that's MY ghost-half's name. Well, the 'Phantom' part is anyway."
"Danny, you have to help me." Amelia said as she got close to him. "My father will find out I left and he might destroy me. He said if I don't obey his every command, I will live to regret it."
Danny seemed a bit crept out by her behavior. "Well, I know Plasmius can be a jerk sometimes, but he can't possibly be THAT much of a fruit loop. Plus he's never even had a kid to begin with."
Then to his surprise, Amelia began to cry. "It was horrible, Danny. He gave me my ghost half and said I had to use my powers to destroy you. But I just can't do it." She sobbed in her hands, but then glanced up at Danny. "Danny, I can't listen to my father anymore."
Then she grabbed Danny's hands, much to his surprise, "Because…I love you."
Danny's face suddenly turned scarlet with a shocked look on his face. "What?" he asked.
"It's true." Amelia responded as she put her arms around him. "I love you and I always have. Don't you remember how I never had the courage to tell you?"
"Uh…uh…uh…" Danny stuttered, feeling flustered, "I'm…flattered and all, but…"
"Oh Danny," Amelia smiled as she hugged him tightly. "That reminds me of how you felt the same way."
"That's not what I meant." Danny quickly said. "I already have a girlfriend. Her name is Sam and she's really nice."
"Sam-Who?" Amelia asked, staring at Danny's blue eyes.
"You don't know her." Danny explained, trying to get out of her grasp. "We've been best friends for years, and we always liked each other. Kinda like how you just said we were."
"But don't you remember all the times we spent together?" Amelia said with her golden yellow eyes twinkling. "How I saved you from that horrible bully, Dash, when we met nine years ago?"
"That was Sam." Danny pointed out.
"Or the time you saved me even when you were under Freakshow's spell."
"That was Sam too." Danny again pointed out, looking rather annoyed.
"Or the times we had those Fake-Out Make-Outs."
"Again that was Sam!"
"Danny…" Amelia suddenly said, looking a bit confused. "I'm probably much prettier than Sam is; and thanks to my father, I have ghost powers, so I can help you fight ghosts better than she can and we can finally stop my father together."
"What?" Danny shouted as he glared at her. "You think I would just dump Sam and start dating you? You can forg-" but he was interrupted when the ghost girl planted a kiss right on his mouth.
After it went on for about twenty seconds and they finally broke apart, Danny had a horrified look. "Uh…what just happened?" he asked absent-mindedly.
Amelia giggled and said, "Oh Danny, you kiss so wonderfully just like I remember. How about we go inside, go into your room, and…" she then whispered into Danny's ear which made the ghost boy widen his eyes in shock.
"What?! I'm only fourteen!" Danny quickly pointed out. "I wouldn't even do that with Sam!"
But he was stopped yet again by Amelia kissing him again. After about eight seconds, a familiar voice shouted, "DANNY FENTON!!!"
They broke apart and turned around to see a very angry Sam standing a few feet away from them.
"Sam!" Danny shouted, feeling a little awkward. "It's…it's not what it looks like."
Sam stormed over to him and snapped, "It better not be. To think I leave you alone to go stop Vortex, and twenty minutes later, I find you making-out with some…" she stopped and looked at Amelia, noting her wings, "Some fallen angel behind my back!"
Danny put up his hands defensively. "Sam, I…it…it wasn't me!"
But Sam just continued to snap at him angrily, "You know, I have half the mind to dump you right here and now!"
"Danny…" Amelia suddenly said in the same high elegant voice. "Is this the 'Sam' girl you told me about?"
Before Danny could respond, Sam suddenly said bitterly, "Yeah, what of it? Who are you supposed to be?"
"I'm Angel Phantom." She responded sweetly, "Danny's girlfriend."
Sam daggered at Danny as the ghost boy quickly said, "I don't know! She just showed up out of nowhere and started saying stuff!"
Amelia then spotted the ring on Sam's finger. "Where did you get that ring?"
Sam looked at it and answered coldly, "Danny gave it to me. Long before you came around."
"It's a fake." Amelia suddenly said. "I have the real one right here."
She lifted up her left hand and showed them a gold ring with an aqua green stone on her gloved-finger that looked identical to Sam, much to the two's shock.  "Danny gave it to me after stopping the Disasteroid a month ago." Amelia explained. "It has my name engraved on it and that was how we became an official couple."
"What are you talking about?" Sam objected. "He gave it to ME after stopping the Disasteroid."
"It's true." Danny intervened. "Just like all the other stuff I told you Sam did and you didn't."
Amelia got a look of shock until she cried, "Danny!" and then rushed over to him and grabbed his arm, much to Sam's dismay. "She's brainwashed you! That evil Goth is trying to come between us!"
Danny just stared, feeling even more confused than before. But Sam just glared and said, "Oh, I see what's going on." She walked over to the two. "She's a 'Sue', Danny."
"But she said her name was 'Amelia'." Danny pointed out, confused.
"No, Danny," Sam corrected angrily. "Mary-Sues are people who come out of nowhere and start butting into other people's lives." Then she glared at the Sue. "Not to mention steal their boyfriends."
"She's the 'Sue', Danny." Amelia said as she glared at Sam. "She's the one trying to destroy our love. Just like Paulina and Valerie did."
"Wrong again, Angel Phantom- or should I say, MARY." Danny said as he glared at her. "I think the one trying to brainwash me here is you."
Suddenly, Amelia gasped in horror. "Danny…how could you? We loved each other for so long. We realized that when we learned we shared the same dream."
"Again, not you!" Danny responded. "Everything that Sam said is true. You showed up out of nowhere, tried to feed me some story about how your father, Vlad, captured you and turned you half-ghost, and now you completely took over Sam's life and said we're best friends turned couple."
"If you're trying to replace me, you're obviously not doing a very good job at it." Sam said with her arms crossed.
"So, you might as well go back to Plasmius, or whoever your real father is." Danny said as he turned around.
Then Amelia started screaming in agony, "DAAANNNNYYY!!!"  And she suddenly disappeared into a bright light with white feathers surrounding her until there was nothing left of the ghost/angel sue.
"Wow," Sam said as she and Danny stare in bewilderment. "Even her exit was sueish."
Danny chuckled, "Totally." But then he stopped and looked at Sam. "So…does this mean you're not breaking up with me?"
"Duh, of course not." Sam easily answered. "I would never give you up to some Sue who thinks she's me. Would YOU ditch me to date someone who replaces me?"
Danny scoffed and proudly answered, "Are you kidding? Of course I wouldn't." then he put his arm around her. "I would always pick the real you over some Mary-Screw any day."
"It's 'Sue', Danny." Sam dully corrected.

The End
Before anyone says anything, this is a short humorous fic I did to mock stories that have Mary-Sues that pair up with Danny by replacing Sam. I’m okay with some OCs that are paired up with Danny, and I have nothing against people who don’t like DxS, but what annoys me is that they sometimes replace Sam entirely and take her role as their own; such as: Be part of Danny’s posse until she and Danny realize their feelings for each other and become a couple in the end. The only difference is that she is not Goth, has ghost powers, and is probably hotter than Sam. This is because the author just drops Sam from the story like she never existed or is shoved aside to be one of the supporters of the couple. Some examples of this is when Ember casts her spell that makes Danny fall in love with someone; instead of Sam he lusts for, it’s [insert character’s name here]. Another example is when Danny is flirting with either Paulina or Valerie; instead of Sam taking her anger and jealousy out on a random nearby object, [insert character’s name in here] does it instead. Also, instead of Sam getting turned into a plant girl; [insert You-Know-Who’s name here] does instead. Like I said, I have nothing against OCs paired up with Danny. I just think the authors can be a little more creative when pairing their characters with Danny instead of just having them do everything Sam does to get Danny’s attention. And again, I didn’t write this to flame anyone or be mean. I just lately find some OCs to be unoriginal Mary-Sues and Sam rip-offs. If you wanna disagree with me, go ahead. But like I said, I only wrote this for fun, not hate.
Hope you enjoy the story and comment

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GUYS THIS IS NOT SHADING CARRIE ANGEL!!! I can't believe I had to write that in all caps. This is so freaking wonderful that someone puts something like this out there without being meanspirited or targeting a specific person. Learn to take a joke!